Wednesday, March 13, 2013

September the 11. M y little sister is jumping on my body  (a few minutes later) ana whispers into  wake up just to get her a drink  into my ear then slaps me on the cheek to whack me but i resist i closed my eyes and just went to sleep but my little sister work me up again.I went to sleep for one i mean one minute she dansit go to sleep ever in her life i don't know why.O no not again she split her water on me AGAIN.The end ?   
Posted by Anonymous at Wednesday, March 13, 2013

2 comments:

  1. AnonymousFriday, March 15, 2013

    great story i love all the onomatopoeia

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  2. BeccSunday, July 07, 2013

    Hi Brodie - it's Aunty Becc! I like your writing - you have a neat imagination and you are creative. I can't figure out what type of writing this is and what you were trying to get across to your audience. I got interested as it is an exciting chain of conscious thought from you but I want to read MORE so that I know what this is all about!! xoxx

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